-Monday : 8/17/09
~It was a normal day at summer camp. We were going on another trip. This time, we are going to the movies to see District 9. On the way there, our class decided to take a break and go to this park. At the park, my cousin and I found a dragonfly. It was struggling to get out of the bushes.
This paragraph can be used as a story. This is how I think the story should go :
Title=The Dragonfly
"On one sunny day, Jenny decided to go for a walk. She then found a dragonfly stuck in some bushes by the pond. She decided to help it. She let it free and watched it as it flew around her. She continued to walk along the path.
When Jenny was returning home from her walk, she saw the dragonfly again... stuck in the bushes. "Now why would it be there again?" Jenny asked herself..."
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