-Sunday 9/6/09 (Labor Day?)
~Today, my family and I (my cousins, my mom, and my aunt) decided to go to Manhattan. On the subway, we saw a crazy man... Except, he claimed he wasn't crazy. He said that he's an entertainer at Broadway. LIES!
This paragraph can be used in a story. This is how I think the story should go :
Title : The Subway Adventure
"Come on guys, we're gonna miss the train!" Becky yelled at us. "We're coming, we're coming!" Maiky, Becky's sister replied. "Wives are very helpful. Us husbands are very lucky to have such wonderful women as wives. My wife passed away by a disease. I miss her," said a man on the subway. Everyone was staring at him. WHO DID HE THINK HE WAS? TALKING THIS LOUD... TO HIMSELF... ON A SUBWAY TRAIN...? "You all may think I'm crazy, but I'm not. I'm an entertainer at Broadway," he said..."
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