~*Sophia's Inspirations*~ <--- #2 !

-Wednesday : 8/19/09
~At the beach, my class and I buried one of our classmates in the sand...
This sentence can be used in a story. This is how I say it should go :
Title = Day At Coney Island
""Hey, Sophia, can you bury me in the sand?" "Sure, Timothy!" I replied. As fast as I could, I buried Timothy in the sand. Next thing I know, my cousins are crowding over us. They start helping out. Then, the teachers are coming. "What are you guys doing?" They ask. "We're burying Timothy in the sand!" I said. "Come on, help us out, would you?" Then, the teachers start helping. By the time we're done, we have to go. What a fun day!"