-Monday : 9/28/09
~Lunch. It was so funny! It all happened at once. Mona was throwing out her garbage when... WHAM! Susan whacked Mona's lunch tray over. Mona's chocolate milk container bottle thing splattered everywhere. The milk was everywhere. It hit Eric, Mona, Susan, and the floor. EPIC!!
This paragraph can be made into a story as well. This is how I would put it :
Title=Lunch
"YAY!" cried Susan. WHAM! Went Mona's lunch tray. "WHAT WAS THAT FOR?" "That's so funny!" said Anna. "DID YOU SEE THAT? SUSAN JUST PUT HER ARMS IN THE AIR AND EVERYTHING WENT FLYING. AHAHAHAHAHA..."
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